‘Saying I Will’ – the Story Behind The Story

Royal Wedding – photo taken from the TV!

I’ve got a confession to make, dear Readers: I keep things from you.

You see – and I’m sure I’m not alone in this – my story ideas tend to come from things that happen to me. And as many of you are also writers, with your eyes and ears on ‘high alert’ for a good idea, there’s a danger that if I tell you an amusing anecdote or a strange chance remark, you’ll use it in a story yourself (possibly even unconsciously!) before I get a chance to do so. It’s fair enough, isn’t it?

Because, as we all know, there’s no copyright on ideas. I blogged about that here last year.

But if you’re wondering how I use chance remarks to generate story ideas, here’s an example:

The Story Behind The Story

The background to my story ‘Saying I Will’ (published in WW a few years ago), was originally published on the womagwriter blog but it’s been taken off, so I feel justified in putting it here. But apologies if it rings a (wedding?) bell – as you may have read it before.

‘Saying I Will’ is about a woman, Trisha, whose ex-husband is re-marrying and how it’s made her feel.

WW actually spoiled the ‘twist’ a little, as at the beginning, I wanted the reader to think it’s Trisha who’s getting married (the first line is, “On the day of the wedding, I wake to bright sunshine…” ) but in the ‘blurb’ WW printed a line from the story which clearly tells the reader that it’s her ex-husband who’s getting married – but never mind. Once they’ve bought the story, they can do what they like!

I actually got the idea for the story from 2 different sources and I love it when I’m able to bring two ideas together like that because that usually means the story has a bit of ‘depth’ and layering to it.

Source 1: The Charity Shop

I took a bag of stuff into our local charity shop one summer and commented to the man behind the counter on what another miserable day it was (it was raining). He shrugged and said, “It can rain every day this month as far as I’m concerned. Especially on the 28th.”

So, naturally, I asked him the significance of 28th (of July, as it happened) and he explained that his ex-wife was getting remarried on that day and they were having a marquee in the garden. (Sad really, wasn’t it?).

I probably didn’t help matters by telling him (truthfully) that my brother’s birthday is 28th July and he always has a barbecue and, as my brother is Mr Jammy, the sun ALWAYS shines (and actually, it did again that year and I thought about the charity shop man on that day).

But my little conversation made me think, ‘There’s a story in that’. But I didn’t quite have enough material to turn it into something…. until …

Source 2: The Daily Mail

The Mail, and other tabloids, whatever you may think of them as ‘newspapers’, are a great source of ideas and inspiration for women’s magazine stories as they have lots of women-focussed lifestyle articles and human interest stories.

And not long after the incident in the charity shop, I read an article in the Mail about what to do if your ‘ex’ is getting remarried. One suggestion was to go on holiday – to a different time zone – and concentrate on your future, instead of mourning the past.

Ta dah! That was it. That gave me the rest of the story. Trisha and her old college friend Sarah head for California and drink champagne on the day of her ex’s wedding. And when Sarah asks her if she’ll drink a toast to the rest of her life, Trisha says, “I Will!”

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13 Responses to ‘Saying I Will’ – the Story Behind The Story

  1. That was a clever way to put together a story idea. I like how your mind thinks.:-)

  2. GeorgieMoon says:

    I loved reading this! It’s always good to find great ideas from unexpected sources, like the charity shop!

  3. Sharon boothroyd says:

    Great to read how the idea came to you, Helen.

  4. Michaela Eyley says:

    Brilliant bit of insight. Enjoyed reading it, thanks Helen.

    • Thanks, Michaela. I suppose the moral of the story is.. always talk to people when you are out and about. You never know what they might reveal or what ideas they might spark!

  5. juliathorley says:

    I love how you brought two ideas together. I’ve got a notebook full of half-stories that aren’t quite strong enough to work at a 2,000-word stretch, so perhaps I should shuffle them and see which fall together.

    • Definitely, Julia. Have a look at your notebook and see if you can pull a couple of those ‘half stories’ together. You’ll almost certainly come up with something original too – and that’s half the battle! Good luck!

  6. pennywrite says:

    Interesting! But I would say there’s little risk attached to sharing (well, perhaps not too detailed!) ideas because every writer will almost certainly interpret them in a different way. Still, I do understand the glee felt when inspiration strikes, and often want to hug it close for a while to see how everything works.

    • Penny, I know what you mean – there are plenty of interpretations of ideas and everyone would write something different – but a magazine wouldn’t print two stories with the same theme or specific idea within a few weeks – or even months – of each other, so if someone ‘pipped me to the post’ and got their story in before me, mine would almost certainly be turned down! Good, original ideas for womags are hard enough to come up with (for me, anyway – I know some people find it easy)!

  7. Wendy Clarke says:

    Love reading how stories come about and charity shops can certainly be a mine of inspiration.

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